After watching back the final cut we found some points for us to improve.
To make the film look more professional we want to add a Rating Screen at the beginning which is the green screen with text to show the film has been approved.
We think the music should carry on at the beginning to play behind the titles but fade the volume for the audience to still hear the dialogue.
We also think that it needs to be made clearer that Charly is in London either by a sign or text to show her location. This London scene then goes straight into the drug deal which we feel cuts to suddenly. To make this flow smoother we could slow down the sound and add a transition.
Good work Georgina, you have worked really hard on the editing to create a convincing text.
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